Finn’s family has 7 peoples. Every people have a character. This make an own interesting.
Finn’s father is an architect. He is sizzling - hot. Finn’s mother is a housewife. She is always nagging. If anybody in his family make house dirty, she will grumble all day. His eldest brother is a sportsman. He is delighter and hunk. He can lift him off lightly. His second brother works for a construction company. He is also horrendous.
Finn has two sisters. The first sister is a doctor. She is skeletal. She seems malnourished. She has a trouble about stomachache. The second sister is a journalist. She is tall and voluptuous. She looks vibrant. She is always hilarious. Everybody often say that she is very drop – dead gorgeous.
And Finn is a handsome boy. He is not tall, not fat. He is middle – sized.
Finn’s father is an architect. He is sizzling - hot. Finn’s mother is a housewife. She is always nagging. If anybody in his family make house dirty, she will grumble all day. His eldest brother is a sportsman. He is delighter and hunk. He can lift him off lightly. His second brother works for a construction company. He is also horrendous.
Finn has two sisters. The first sister is a doctor. She is skeletal. She seems malnourished. She has a trouble about stomachache. The second sister is a journalist. She is tall and voluptuous. She looks vibrant. She is always hilarious. Everybody often say that she is very drop – dead gorgeous.
And Finn is a handsome boy. He is not tall, not fat. He is middle – sized.
your writing has a lot of adjectives but the story is not interesting>:P
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